Friday, May 15, 2009

Caterpiller vs. Worm, by Nico, Mr. Clarity's First Grade Class

Caterpillar vs. Worm

Hey, did you ever see a worm battle a caterpillar?
Well I did.

They did a battle...
DING, DING, DING...

The battle was on!

The worm did a flip but the caterpillar
whipped his back!

Caterpillar wins!

2 comments:

  1. Dear Nico,

    I really loved the way you used your observation to help you create
    that wonderful poem. I liked it when the worm did a flip!
    From,
    A VERY BIG WRITING FAN!

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  2. Love your poem,
    I'm so proud of you.
    Love,
    Mimi

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