Wednesday, April 29, 2009

BEST WINTER EVER! by Stefan Lesco, Fourth Grade

This past winter was one of the most fun I have ever had. My dad, my brother Michael (and little brother Tommy too) built a huge ice skating rink in our back yard for us to play ice hockey. We spent a lot of time skating with my family and my friends and it was a blast! One of the best times was when my cousin Kevin and some friends came over with their fathers. We played a hockey game us kids against fathers. We had a great time playing and the fathers always think they can win! But they didn't. We have a big light shining on the rink so we can play late. We also have a bon fire so when we took a break we can warm up standing by it. And we always have hot chocolate to drink and snacks. This winter was the best winter ever.


  1. Dear Stefan,

    I loved how you wrote about an experience that really happened to you. I'm not a very good ice skater, but you made it seem like I was right there watching all of the action!
    Mr. Maciolek

  2. Stefan, I am so proud of the way you "painted a picture" in my head with your words. Keep up the good work!
    Your teacher,
    Ms. O.

  3. Stefan,
    You brought tears to my eyes when you read your story in front of the entire school! I am so proud of you!! Your story made me want to play ice hockey in your backyard! Keep on writing!!
    Mrs. Herbert