Wednesday, April 29, 2009

BEST WINTER EVER! by Stefan Lesco, Fourth Grade

This past winter was one of the most fun I have ever had. My dad, my brother Michael (and little brother Tommy too) built a huge ice skating rink in our back yard for us to play ice hockey. We spent a lot of time skating with my family and my friends and it was a blast! One of the best times was when my cousin Kevin and some friends came over with their fathers. We played a hockey game us kids against fathers. We had a great time playing and the fathers always think they can win! But they didn't. We have a big light shining on the rink so we can play late. We also have a bon fire so when we took a break we can warm up standing by it. And we always have hot chocolate to drink and snacks. This winter was the best winter ever.
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3 comments:

  1. mark maciolekApril 29, 2009 at 5:22 PM

    Dear Stefan,

    I loved how you wrote about an experience that really happened to you. I'm not a very good ice skater, but you made it seem like I was right there watching all of the action!
    KEEP ON WRITING!
    Mr. Maciolek

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  2. AnonymousMay 1, 2009 at 6:27 AM

    Stefan, I am so proud of the way you "painted a picture" in my head with your words. Keep up the good work!
    Your teacher,
    Ms. O.

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  3. AnonymousMay 10, 2009 at 2:15 PM

    Stefan,
    You brought tears to my eyes when you read your story in front of the entire school! I am so proud of you!! Your story made me want to play ice hockey in your backyard! Keep on writing!!
    Mrs. Herbert

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