Thursday, April 23, 2009

OUR EARTH, By Jeremy M., Mrs. Herbert's First Grade Class

Our Earth

Our Earth gives us pets

and animals and water to drink

Our Earth

The animals are our friends

The Earth helps us and we help the Earth.


  1. Dear Jeremy,

    I really loved your poem. The Earth does help us, and we
    should help the Earth.
    Keep writing,
    Mr. M.

  2. Jeremy,

    Your poem about the earth is great!! I am so proud of you!! Keep on writing!!
    Mrs. Herbert